During my presentation, I think that my strengths were that
I barely used my notecards. In addition, I made eye contact with my audience,
which I think was a result of not using my notecards. I practiced my speech a
lot before giving it, so I really knew my facts well too, which I feel was another
strength. Practicing my speech gave me the assurance I needed to successfully deliver
my speech.
As for weaknesses/areas I would like to change, I wish that
I had been stronger in the last two portions of my speech. I feel that I lost
my way a little bit towards the end and I wish that I had been better prepared
for those sections. I also wish that I had made my transitions more seamless. I
feel like I stumbled a little bit around certain points and I think I could
have been stronger. Another area I wish I could have changed was my movement. I
wish that I would have moved a little bit more comfortably, as I feel that my
movements were out of nerves more than anything.
In terms of ethos, pathos, and logos, I told personal
stories and used shocking statistics. Both of these appealed well to my audience’s
emotions and logic. I also established my credibility through using personal
stories which helped my audience see me as an authority.
As for my goals this semester, I am fairly content with my
progress. My first goal was to diminish my remaining fears of public speaking.
For the most part, I feel this was met with some success. However, I was really
nervous for this speech, but I think it was because of the PowerPoint and the
clicker, as this was the first time I’ve ever had to present with a clicker in
my hand. In addition, the oral citations made me nervous too. My other goal for
the semester was to improve my skills. I feel that I did meet this goal with
success.
My biggest improvement this semester is that I became more
comfortable speaking to smaller groups of people. When I’m speaking to a
smaller group, I’ve found I often am more nervous than I am for a larger group,
but I improved this skill this semester.
I think that I still need to work on being more seamless
with my transitions and my presentation as a whole in terms of flow. I also
need to work on not getting quite as nervous when a presentation is different
than ones I’ve done in the past.
I personally thought your big presentation was great! Using ethos, pathos, and logos really grabbed the audience into your speech. There wasn't a dull moment and I genuinely think the audience was lured right from the beginning. I also begin to lose my way during the end of my speech, because I just want to finish. But overall you did a great job!!
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